In this article, Medical School Personal Statements that can beat 52,323 Applications, you will learn to create a sincere, interesting, and thoughtful essay that highlights your strengths and qualities.
With more than 50,000 applicants to medical school this year, only those with a compelling story will be selected to interview.
While metrics, such as the MCAT and GPA, are crucial, admissions committee members view applications holistically meaning who you are and what is important to you matters just as much as your “numbers.”
We’ve got you covered:
Below are some strategies you can employ that will help you stand out from the crowd.
Let’s get started:
Whether you’re applying to AMCAS, TMDSAS, or AACOMAS essay prompts are generally not topic-driven like a traditional essay you might write for an academic class. So let us guide you to understand Medical School Personal Statements that can beat 52,323 Applications.
Keep in mind:
We encourage applicants to try and write a topic-driven essay that has a distinct theme.
“I have a great theme, why I want to be a doctor.”
Of course, from time to time, a student might write a beautiful essay with a theme, but, most of the time these essays do not succeed in telling an applicant’s story comprehensively and convincingly.
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I don’t have anything to write about.
Of course you have a story.Everyone does.
Here is a list of questions that can help a student find key elements of his or her story.
How should you start your medical school personal statement?
You hear conflicting advice. Some tell you not to open with a story. Others tell you to always begin with a story. Regardless of the advice you receive, be sure to do three things:
1) Be true to yourself. Everyone will have an opinion regarding what you should and should not write. Follow your own instincts. Your personal statement should be a reflection of you, and only you.
2) Start your personal statement with something catchy.Think about the list of potential topics above.
3) Don’t rush your work. Don’t panic. Composing great documents takes time and you don’t want your writing and ideas to be sloppy and underdeveloped.
Medical school personal statements that can beat 52,323 applications.
SHOW, DON’T TELL
Know this mantra:
Something my clients hear me say throughout the application process, and a common mantra for anyone who works in admissions, is to “show” rather than “tell.”
What does this mean, exactly?
It means that whether you are writing a personal statement or interviewing, you should show evidence for what you are trying to communicate.
Here’s an example.
In a personal statement, never say that you are compassionate and empathetic; instead, demonstrate that you possess these qualities by offering concrete examples.
Medical School Personal Statements that can beat 52,323 Applications via GIPHY
Also keep in mind:
Like your personal statement, your interview responses, too, should evoke all the qualities and characteristics that your interviewer is seeking. Again, show don’t tell.
And consider this:
The following is a medical school interview question, “Tell me about your most valuable shadowing experience and why it was important to you.”
Hit them with this kind of answer:
“My most valuable experience was shadowing Dr. Brit. I really learned so much about oncology, which I found fascinating. I would go home every night and read about what I had heard and learned. But I also enjoyed watching him talk to patients. I noticed that he held each patient’s hand, listened to them attentively and made clear to each person that he really cared.”
And there’s more:
By talking about his mentor, this applicant shows his understanding of the importance of compassionate care, and in expressing this, further suggests that these ideals are important to him, too.
The mantra “show, don’t tell” cannot be said enough. Remember this throughout every stage, written documents and interviews, of the medical admissions process.
Where can I find further inspiration? Need help with your personal statement med school?
1) Click hereto visit the Student Doctor Network website to find out how other students are preparing to write their personal statements.
2) Click hereto see what students on the Reddit medical school personal statement premed forum are saying about their personal statements.
3) Your application materials must be authentic, but sometimes a little inspiration helps. Read The MedEdits Guide to Medical School Admissions. There you will find examples of ‘successful’ personal statements and application entries.
I would like more resources about medical school personal statements and how to apply.
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Where should I look?
For those of you who love to drink coffee and stay up until the roosters come out.Here’s a great “go to” list where you can read about more personal statement and application topics.
1) Click here to visit www.AAMC.org to learn about AMCAS, the allopathic (M.D) application service.
2) Click here to visit the American Association of Colleges of Osteopathic Medicine website to review important requirements for your AACOMAS application.
3) If you want to apply to most medical schools in Texas, you will need to complete the TMDSAS application. Click here for more information.
Personal Statement for Medical School Myths
Personal Statement Myths:The list below is based on an article I wrote all the way back in 2010 for The Student Doctor Network.I guess some solid advice never gets old.
#1: Never write about anything that took place in the past or before college.
#2: Never write about topics unrelated to medicine.
#3: Never write about a patient encounter or your own experience with health care.
#4: Always have a theme or a thesis.
#5: Don’t write about anything negative.
Click here to read the article on SDN.
Example Personal Statement
Synopsis: A first generation college student learns from family illness. This personal statement is an excerpt from The MedEdits Guide to Medical School Admissions, P. 162.
AADSAS requires an essay from each applicant that will give admissions officers a personal account of who the applicant is, what his or her interests are, and why he or she is interested in the field of dentistry. The essay is limited to 4500 characters (approximately one page, includes spaces and punctuation). The prompt for the essay on AADSAS is purposely blank so that applicants do not feel restricted in what/how they should write, but the ADEA recommends that “your Personal Statement […] address why you desire to pursue a dental education and how a dental degree contributes to your personal and professional goals. The Admissions Committee members who read your essay are looking for individuals who are motivated, academically prepared, articulate, socially conscious, and knowledgeable about the profession. Write about your experiences and any qualities that will make you stand out”. In short, your personal statement should focus on your interest in dentistry, some things you have done to this point that illustrate your interest, and how these attributes will help you succeed in your future career as a dentist.
While the focus of your essay should not prevent you from writing an interesting and enjoyable composition, avoid writing in a vague, philosophical manner. The personal statement is not meant to be a creative piece, but rather a clear, concise, professional essay indicating your interest in entering the field of dentistry and providing solid information to support your acceptance. Remember, the admissions committee at each dental school will be deciding who they wish to invite for an interview based solely on the AADSAS application so the personal statement will be your only opportunity to speak to them in your own words (until you meet them in person on interview day). Make it count.
Although a poorly-written essay may not prevent an applicant with highly competitive credentials from being invited for an interview, a well-written essay can be strongly influential in persuading admissions committee members to interview (or even accept) an applicant who is lacking in one or more aspects of their application (see Dental School Preparations).
Below are some of the Duke Pre-Dental Society’s favorite resources for perfecting a dental school personal statement. Feel free to browse through the wealth of information found in the links below.
Duke University HPA Personal Statement Advice
“Writing the Primary Essay for Medical School” — Dan Scheirer, Duke University Dean of Health Professions Advising
Student Doctor Network Essay Workshop 101
Student Doctor Network Essay Workshop 101 Supplement
Excellent Inquarta Article on “Writing a Winning Personal Statement”
University of Michigan Personal Statement Tips
Duke Pre-Dental Society “AADSAS and the Personal Statement” Powerpoint
Sample Dental School Personal Statement (with Dean Scheirer’s comments)
Sample Medical School Personal Statement #1 (with Dean Scheirer’s comments)
Sample Medical School Personal Statement #2 (with Dean Scheirer’s comments)
DMDStudent.com Personal Statement Examples (part 1)
DMDStudent.com Personal Statement Examples (part 2)