Military Academy Application Essays

Only the few and the proud can be admitted into a United States Service Academy, and rightly so. It’s tough to get in and tough to make it through, but since the job after graduation requires people of great courage and determination, then the application process is a fitting place for you to start showing your mettle.

So, you think you want to be an officer in the Military? To do that, you can go to one of the 5 Federal US Service Academies, you can go to a military college or university, or you can go to a university that offers a ROTC Program.  Begin to research these programs as soon as possible, because there are many things you need to do to become an Officer.

The Federal Service Academies include: United States Military Academy (often referred to as West Point), United States Naval Academy, United States Merchant Marine Academy, United States Air Force Academy, and United States Coast Guard Academy. The five Service Academies offer a free, top-notch college education to these men and women who dedicate their careers to serving our country, many of whom choose to major in some field of Engineering (yay Engineering!).This is a breakdown of what you need to do to get into one of the Academies. 

1. Focus on your grades.
Just as an example, 90% of Cadets at West Point were in the top 20% of their class.Your GPA is really, really going to matter in this game, so do your very best starting freshman year of high school.

2. Open your (pre) Candidate Profile on each academy’s/school’s website.

This starts the process and is not optional, and it should simultaneously register you for the mailing lists so that you can stay informed about events near you.

3. Visit the campuses 

Try to do an official, registered campus visit when at all possible so it goes on record that you were there. Some campuses may allow you to stay overnight and sit in on classes, or even meet someone in admissions. While you are there, be sure to take the tour and be on your absolute best behavior. Every interaction counts in admissions, and doubly so in the military.

4. Meet the Academy liaison in your area

Each geographic area of the US is assigned to a representative or liaison for each Academy, and you will need to meet and likely interview with this person. Prepare for and ace your interview with the liaison. Read current events before you go and practice what you might say. Be sure to show your desire to be in the military; have a ready, polished answer for why you want to join the Service.  You should also attend the Academy events in your area (which are usually held in October and March).

5. Begin networking to get a nomination from a Senator, Congressman, or the Vice President of the USA

You will want to reach out to everyone you know to see if anyone can introduce you to one of these government officials, or even put in a good word for you. Every little bit helps, and be diligent about asking people. Start early. Network with both Senators and Congressmen because they can only offer 10 nominations each.  Call their office and ask if they offer any events that you can attend, or if you can intern or volunteer there, or if you can just come and meet them sometime–anything. Always be amazingly polite. In the military, “Yes, Ma’am” and “Yes, Sir” go a long way.

In the Spring of your Junior year you will need to start the formal application process to receive the nomination. Contact the offices of these government officials to ask about the procedure–or better yet, check on the website first and then follow up with any questions via a call or scheduled visit. You do not need a nomination for the Coast Guard Academy.  You should also see if you can claim residency in multiple districts (state and county, perhaps) as this would increase your chances of securing the nomination because you could ask multiple officials.  You can apply for a nomination from these four sources: 2 Senators, 1 Congressman, or VP of US.  Many of these officials make their decisions in the Fall as to whom they will write letters for, but you should start MUCH EARLIER with familiarizing yourself with the process and networking (networking means getting to know people who might someday be able to help you). The nominator will notify the Academy if you are selected, so there is nothing you need to do there.  (Note: Each member of Congress can have only 5 people attending the Naval Academy at any time. Members can nominate 10 candidates for each vacancy so the Naval Academy can choose–OR they can nominate one principle nominee and 9 others as alternates).

6. Apply for summer leader seminars at the Academies in January of Junior year

These seminars, where offered, are solid introductions into what your life would be like at a Service Academy.  The camps, like the Academies, are intense.

7. Line up 3 recommendations for your nomination during Junior year

Many Academies like one rec to be from your guidance counselor.  Some Academies want a rec from your English, Math, Physics or Chemistry teacher.  Check requirements and do your absolute best for all of your teachers.

8. Apply for your nomination (April)

A Senator or Congressman will typically request that you submit: an application, 3 rec letters, official transcript, SAT/ACT scores, resume, 250-500 word essay (usually on why you want to be in the military or what it means to you to serve), optional photo. They often request that you mail these in one envelope.

9. DoDMERB exams — Dept of Defense Medical Examination Review Board (pronounced: DAHD-merb)

You will need to pass a medical examination to demonstrate that you can physically handle the regimen of an Academy. The physician will often ask for previous medical records.  You can do this in the Summer after Junior year.

10. APPLY EARLY even though admission is rolling

Some military applications open in April so you want to apply as early as you can; applications are date and time stamped when they arrive. (In the event that you may not be accepted, let them know you are interested in their prep school programs, where they may offer you a spot.)

What you need to apply: 
Transcripts for all 6 semesters
Super-scored SAT/ACT tests (Average ACT: 26, Average SAT: 1260)
English, Math, Chem, and Physics teachers to do a School Official Evaluation in the summer
Candidate Personal Data Record
Candidate Statements (Essays).

You will receive one of the following responses: 
An offered spot in the Academy
An offered spot in their prep school (for kids who fit what they are looking for, but need to improve their GPA)
A denial

If you don’t get in, RE-APPLY. Go to a civilian university and join ROTC, go to a military school, or go to a Post Graduate year to improve your GPA. DO NOT GIVE UP.  Military personnel exhibit determination at all times. This is the first of many tests. Do NOT give up.

Use the CollegeMapper Military Timeline to stay on track with all your tasks.

There are many things that you can be doing to prepare yourself for the military and your application, as early as freshman year of high school: 

  • Volunteer: Start volunteering in your community or school as soon as possible and regularly.
  • Be a leader: Join clubs and activities through your school or community to show your leadership skills, likely when you are an upperclassman.
  • Be athletic: Earning a Varsity letter looks good for your commitment, and being in shape will help you pass the Fitness Assessment.
  • Be prepared: Always know your high school rank, GPA and test scores so that you can set goals for yourself to improve.
  • Do something leadership-related in the summertime: Try mentoring, coaching, tutoring, being a camp counselor, working, etc.
  • Consider going to a military summer school prep program: These really help you understand what the military will be like.

Some summer camp options include:

Whatever grade you are in, there is something you can be doing now to prepare if attending a military school is your objective. You will need to be focused and set clear goals for yourself. Grades need to be a top priority, and you should take advantage of every opportunity to talk to Academy graduates and current members of the military.  These schools are prestigious places to be, and if you gain admittance, you have every right to be very, very proud.

For more information login to CollegeMapper and take a look at our timeline for applying to military programs.

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Topic: "Why I want to attend a military academy"

My desire to attend a military academy has been more of a process for me than a decision. I grew up the son of a career public servant and was undoubtedly influenced by my upbringing. For over 25 years my father put his life on the line each day as a Federal law enforcement agent to make our nation safer. I have grown up admiring him for his loyalty and selfless commitment. As I consider my future, I know that I want to follow in his footsteps in a public service career that helps ensure the safety and freedom of our great nation.

Today, I believe the most serious threat to our nation comes from beyond our borders and that's why my focus is on serving in the military. Since 9/11, our nation has led the fight against terrorism but we must continue to lead this fight and step up our efforts to be successful. Our battles have not been easy and they have certainly not been without sacrifice but we are making progress in the war on terror and the youth of our nation, especially our young leaders, must answer the call to serve. I welcome this challenge to serve and I believe our military provides me with the greatest opportunity to acquire the knowledge, skills, and abilities to be highly successful.

For a long time I knew I wanted to serve in the military but I was unsure of the branch of service. My grandfather was a Marine and Korean War veteran; my uncle was a Navy fighter pilot during the Vietnam War; and, a close friend from high school currently attends the Air Force Academy. Earlier this year I was honored to visit the Air Force Academy as a Division 1 soccer recruit. From the moment I stepped on campus it all just seemed to click - the location and setting, the educational opportunities, the esprit de corps, the opportunity to fly, and the chance to play soccer for the Fighting Falcons. I knew the Air Force was the right career decision for me and the Air Force Academy offered me the very best opportunities for a highly successful future. .

I feel very fortunate to be among the group of outstanding young men and women who are being considered for an appointment to the U.S. Air Force Academy and I am honored and humbled by the thought of serving shoulder to shoulder with finest soldiers, sailors, and airmen in the greatest military on earth.

Hey, you write very well. I'll give you a pointer that is not a big deal, but... it m,akes writing nicer. Use a comma before the conjunction in a compound sentence (Strunk & White).

Today, I believe the most serious threat to our nation comes from beyond our borders , and that's why my focus is on serving in the military. Since 9/11, our nation has led the fight against terrorism, but we ...

Again here:
I welcome this challenge to serve, and I believe our
But you can also do this:
I welcome this challenge to serve and believe our ...--- no comma necessary because without "I" it is not a compound sentence.

...to the U.S. Air Force Academy, and I am honored and humbled ...

Now.. about the content.. it is very eloquent, but it can be improved if you demonstrate some knowledge of the field you are entering, relevant current events (more specific than what you already wrote)... but really, this is already more impressive than most essays, I think!

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